C4K #2

    The student I commented on was a person by the name of Birklan. Birklan caught my attention quick when I started reading the post. Birklan uses 14 different unique colors in the post and talks about loving art. Birklan seems to have a very good attitude towards it as well, and I told Birklan to keep that attitude up. Birklan likes five main topics about art that contributes to every way of doing art. Those ways are- painting, drawing, coloring, sketching, and shading. If Birklan does art work as much as it seems it does, by the time Birklan is my age Birklan could be very effective in the art category. Two things that I would work on for Birklan would be to watch out for run on sentences, and making sure there is a space after the sentence between the beginning of the next sentence. The link for Birklan's post is http://kidblog.org/4thGradeSL/20gbirklan/my-favorite-hobby/#comment-169